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Have some more fun...ANEROS HAIKU CHAIN
  • artformartform
    Posts: 1,488
    ANEROS HAIKU CHAIN

    sharing a great idea from The TaoBums, we can all share our creative juices here with some linguistic fun...

    Simple rules/form:

    1. three lines, five syllables first line, seven syllables second line, five syllables third line:
    5-7-5

    2. You must take the last line of the previous haiku, and must use that as the first line of yours. That makes the chain and can generate some of the fun!

    3. Take the topic wherever it/you lead and sometimes that may inspire you to more than one haiku per post still following the above rules.

    4. Helpful best form is to quote the previous haiku at the top of your post.

    Here we go!...

    a good haiku chain
    can tickle your prostate too
    if you feel good vibes

    if you feel good vibes
    rumel must be active here
    sending them to you
  • artformartform
    Posts: 1,488
    [QUOTE=artform;86574]Here we go!...

    a good haiku chain
    can tickle your prostate too
    if you feel the vibes

    if you feel the vibes
    rumel must be active here
    sending them to you

    sending them to you
    birthday greetings cockadoo
    noodle as you do
  • artformartform
    Posts: 1,488
    [QUOTE=artform;86575]sending them to you
    birthday greetings cockadoo
    noodle as you do

    Here is rumel's response haiku pair from his post in Anerosian Aphorisms:

    noodle as you do
    loving energies shared
    something we must do

    something we must do
    be patient for our reward
    'artform' leads us through

    Everyone else please post yours here in the Haiku thread :D

    af
  • Billy11
    Posts: 280
    [QUOTE=artform;86578]Here is rumel's response haiku pair from his post in Anerosian Aphorisms:

    noodle as you do
    loving energies shared
    something we must do

    something we must do
    be patient for our reward
    'artform' leads us through

    af
    artform leads us through
    blissfulness will come to you
    lying patiently

    lying patiently
    magnificent is the glow
    ripples grow and grow
  • rumelrumel
    Posts: 2,265

    artform leads us through
    blissfulness will come to you
    lying patiently

    lying patiently
    magnificent is the glow
    ripples grow and grow

    ripples grow and grow
    and as nipples join the flow
    energy abounds

    energy abounds
    microcosmic orbit cum
    'pleats the circuit ground
  • artformartform
    Posts: 1,488
    [QUOTE=rumel;86657]ripples grow and grow
    and as nipples join the flow
    energy abounds


    energy abounds
    microcosmic orbit
    completes the circuit ground

    great guys! try for a strict 5-7-5; adds to the creative challenge

    "energy abounds
    microcosmic orbit cum
    pleats the circuit ground"

    pleats the circuit ground
    with pulses through, round and round
    thrilling body vibes
  • CockadoodleCockadoodle
    Posts: 397
    thrilling body vibes
    within your grasp and more
    well'd up unbidden

    well'd up unbidden
    fierce passions doth unleash
    spiritual fire
  • artformartform
    Posts: 1,488
    [QUOTE=Cockadoodle;86688]thrilling body vibes
    within your grasp and more
    well'd up unbidden

    well'd up unbidden
    fierce passions doth unleash
    spiritual fire

    spiritual fire
    will cum whenever it will
    again gratitude
  • [QUOTE=artform;86718]spiritual fire
    will cum whenever it will
    again gratitude

    again gratitude
    gracefully gives grand gestures
    towards happiness

    towards happiness
    we search amongst Aneros
    journeys far and wide

    journeys far and wide
    within ourselves we venture
    into mystery

    into mystery
    woven curiosity
    winds and twists around

    winds and twists around
    an orgasmic adventure
    of community

    of community
    bound and united as one
    towards goals alike

    towards goals alike
    striving for understanding
    constant expanding

    constant expanding
    of male sexuality
    brings us Aneros

    brings us Aneros
    connects us all together
    circle now fulfilled
  • circle now fulfilled,super o will come one day, waiting patiently.
  • rumelrumel
    Posts: 2,265
    I remember seeing a couple of Haikus posted by'cyrez' that he subsequently deleted but I kind of liked them. So I thought I'd try to work what I remember into the mix here.
    Circle now fulfilled
    Super O will come one day
    waiting patiently

    waiting patiently
    We enter world all alone
    from higher darkness

    from higher darkness
    to the infinite unknown
    here but a short while

    here but a short while
    I feel safe and warm when I
    see your smile again
  • artformartform
    Posts: 1,488
    [QUOTE=rumel;86734]
    here but a short while
    I feel safe and warm when I
    see your smile again[/CENTER]


    see your smile again
    warm vibrations radiate
    energies abound
  • VoyagerVoyager
    Posts: 200
    [QUOTE=artform;86740]see your smile again
    warm vibrations radiate
    energies abound

    Energies abound in this life
    What we feel we are not sure
    one day all will reveal
  • hulahula
    Posts: 212
    Got my ass lubed up
    Progasm is slicked up too
    Slide in pure pleasure
  • artformartform
    Posts: 1,488
    Excellent gentlemen!! :D 31 haiku is a great start! Keep coming back responding and reimagining with more. 8 authors direct and indirect to date, always with room for more and many returns by each. At The TaoBums we are over 2500 haiku and still growing strong. Fascinating the topics and idea shifts.

    Occasionally there are slips and we need patching. That is all part of the fun. Voyager, there are only a few rules here; our haiku should be three lines running in syllables, 5-7-5, strictly; and your first line must be the exact last line of the previous haiku. You too eh hula, on the last-line first-line linking the chain. OK men carry on following this patch...

    energies abound
    in life what's felt we're unsure
    one day all reveal'd

    one day all reveal'd
    ass lub'd up, progasm slick'd too
    slide in pure pleasure

    slide in pure pleasure
    awakening our magic
    golden gland of joy

    :D :D :D Onward...
  • rumelrumel
    Posts: 2,265

    slide in pure pleasure
    awakening our magic
    golden gland of joy


    golden gland of joy
    empowers the man to go
    far beyond the boy

    far beyond the bo
    my spirit will ebb and flow
    no time to be coy

    no time to be coy
    there is much we do not know
    about our wonder toy

    about our wonder toy
    as white as new fallen snow
    in heat we deploy

    in heat we deploy
    into passion it does sew
    ]our souls to enjoy

    Our souls to enjoy
    the beauty within the show
    time can not destroy

    time can not destroy
    and angry winds can not blow
    'way our bliss and joy

    'way our bliss and joy
    enlightenment may follow
    the toy we employ
  • VoyagerVoyager
    Posts: 200
    [QUOTE=rumel;86806][CENTER]slide in pure pleasure
    awakening our magic
    golden gland of joy

    golden gland of joy
    empowers the man to go
    far beyond the boy

    far beyond the boy
    my spirit will ebb and flow
    no time to be coy

    no time to be coy
    there is much we do not know
    about our wonder toy

    about our wonder toy
    as white as new fallen snow
    in heat we deploy

    in heat we deploy
    into passion it does sew
    our souls to enjoy

    Our souls to enjoy
    the beauty within the show
    time can not destroy

    time can not destroy
    and angry winds can not blow
    'way our bliss and joy

    'way our bliss and joy
    enlightenment may follow
    the toy we employ
    [/CENTER]
    the toy we employ
    The Bard of Avon I could dig
    Percy Bysshe a class bore

    Percy Bysshe a class bore
    What did he use a meter for
    No rhyme or reason there

    No rhyme or reason there
    From my school days to my grave
    These thoughts will I keep
  • hulahula
    Posts: 212
    These thoughts I will keep
    Once the aneros is in
    I just cannot sleep
  • artformartform
    Posts: 1,488
    [QUOTE=hula;86811]These thoughts I will keep
    Once the aneros is in
    I just cannot sleep


    I just cannot sleep
    Tao-like threads of energies
    fly me to Ori'n

    fly me to Ori'n
    universe, life creation
    energies connect

    energies connect
    prostate, heart, brains, mind and soul
    all reintegrate

    all reintegrate
    in energetic language
    bards all, we now swim
  • hulahula
    Posts: 212
    Bards all, we now swim
    Sphincters pumping like a gym
    helped by nipple stim
  • artformartform
    Posts: 1,488
    [QUOTE=hula;86885]Bards all, we now swim
    Sphincters pumping like a gym
    helped by nipple stim

    helped by nipple stim
    perineal scrotum buzz
    builds to ecstasies

    builds to ecstasies
    topping sex corporeal
    above and beyond
  • hulahula
    Posts: 212
    ABove and beyond,
    Carnal, meet ethereal
    two kinds of buzzes
  • artformartform
    Posts: 1,488
    [QUOTE=hula;86968]ABove and beyond,
    Carnal, meet ethereal
    two kinds of buzzes

    two kinds of buzzes
    among many possible
    joys beyond belief
  • artformartform
    Posts: 1,488
    Hey Buster! Welcome aboard the Aneros Haiku Chain Gang! :D

    Part of the challenge here, and it too can give you the tingles, is keeping your language in the line syllable limits:
    5 in the first line which the last person gave you,
    7 in the middle line (your first composed); and
    5 in the last line (your second composed- the one you give to the next person).

    So 5-7-5. Pardon my editing you to patch this and please dive in again soon.

    Buster wrote:
    Full Body Orgasm, Wow!
    Who knew we had this in us?
    Thanks guys for the support.



    to 5-7-5 could become...

    Full Body Orgasm!
    WOW! This is really in us?
    Thanks for the support.

    So to this I'll reply/chain onward...

    Thanks for the support
    in the changes underway
    outward and within
  • Love_isLove_is
    Posts: 1,672
    Ok, I'll give this a whirl...


    Errr....
    Deleted by user for not thoroughly reading the haiku rules. :P
  • hulahula
    Posts: 212
    MGX in ass
    It is five seven five guys
    Aneros Haiku
  • rumelrumel
    Posts: 2,265
    MGX in ass
     It is five seven five guys
     Aneros Haiku


    Aneros Haiku
    free form verse from me to you
    sailing right on through

    sailing right on through
    that which we know to be true
    waves of azure blue

    waves of azure blue
    float us on waves of pleasure
    during our leisure

    during our leisure
    we play for fun in the sun
    no need to ever run

    no need to ever run
    as our fear dissolves away
    allowing us to play
  • artformartform
    Posts: 1,488
    [QUOTE=rumel;87125]no need to ever run
    as our fear dissolves away
    allowing us to play
    [/CENTER]

    allowing us to play
    in such a unique new way
    in bed sail away
  • artformartform
    Posts: 1,488
    [QUOTE=artform;87274]allowing us to play
    in such a unique new way
    in bed sail away

    in bed sail away
    mind games, language, take us there
    the goal, why we're here
  • rumelrumel
    Posts: 2,265
    [CENTER][QUOTE=artform;87643]in bed sail away
    mind games, language, take us there
    the goal, why we're here
    the goal, why we're here
    a question of mystery
    for our history

    or our history
    Aneros it does re-write
    a clear shining light

    a clear shining light
    of hope and joy we can see
    when your path is free

    when your path is free
    the world opens up to you
    what you see is true
    [/CENTER]
  • artformartform
    Posts: 1,488
    [QUOTE=rumel;87644][CENTER]when your path is free
    the world opens up to you
    what you see is true
    [/CENTER]

    what you see is true
    what you feel cums within you
    letting all come through
  • rumelrumel
    Posts: 2,265
    [CENTER][QUOTE=artform;87872]what you see is true
    what you feel cums within you
    letting all come through
    letting all come through
    letting the feelings flow too
    letting you be you

    letting you be you
    allows joy to manifest
    the rest is the best

    the rest is the best
    for you always will know this
    your center is bliss
    [/CENTER]
  • artformartform
    Posts: 1,488
    [QUOTE=rumel;87877][CENTER]what you see is true
    what you feel cums within you
    letting all come through


    letting all come through
    letting the feelings flow too
    letting you be you

    letting you be you
    allows joy to manifest
    the rest is the best

    the rest is the best
    for you always will know this
    your center is bliss
    [/CENTER]

    your centre is bliss
    inspiring joyous language
    here poets blossom

    Hey PerennialQuestr and privateidaho03, and all you others join the Haiku Chain Gang!

    Simple framework: your first line is the last line of the previous haiku: ergo the Chain, and meter is 5-7-5 invariably. Make us soar!!!
  • artformartform
    Posts: 1,488
    [QUOTE=artform;88265]your centre is bliss
    inspiring joyous language
    here poets blossom

    here poets blossom
    eupho overfills, expands
    brims my second brain
  • artformartform
    Posts: 1,488
    [QUOTE=artform;88319]here poets blossom
    eupho overfills, expands
    brims my second brain

    brims my second brain
    material and magic
    merge – languid language
  • rumelrumel
    Posts: 2,265
    [CENTER]
    [QUOTE=artform;88320]brims my second brain
    material and magic
    merge – languid language

    merge – languid language
    magik and material
    make ethereal

    make ethereal
    corporal reality
    my duality

    my duality
    spans my mortal time on earth
    giving rise to mirth

    giving rise to mirth
    Aneros use perception
    leads my reflection

    leads my reflection
    in an unknown direction
    of my selection

    of my selection
    I ponder its inception
    essence of spirit

    essence of spirit
    orgasms of soulful joy
    it's more than a toy

    it's more than a toy
    for a man and not a boy
    no time to be coy

    no time to be coy
    this moment is all for you
    enjoy passing through
    [/CENTER]
  • SteelColdiron
    Posts: 229
    [QUOTE=rumel;88326][CENTER]
    no time to be coy
    this moment is all for you
    enjoy passing through[/CENTER]


    Enjoy passing through
    Spiral outward on onward
    Into the unknown

    Into the unknown
    A spiritual path is shown
    Lighting the darkness

    Lighting the darkness
    Are hands guiding and gentle
    Leading towards bliss

    Leading towards bliss
    In the form of hard plastic
    A utopia

    A utopia
    Of pure, raw, instictual
    Testosterone filled

    Testosterone filled
    Thriving, pulsating, building
    Growing into a

    Growing into a
    landscape of man, human, male
    Sexuality
  • artformartform
    Posts: 1,488
    [QUOTE=rikaaim;88341]

    Growing into a
    landscape of man, human, male
    Sexuality


    Sexuality
    can boost us to realms unknown
    energies abound
  • rumelrumel
    Posts: 2,265
    [CENTER][QUOTE=artform;88385]Sexuality
    can boost us to realms unknown
    energies abound

    energies abound
    Aneros is world renown
    spurring thoughts profound

    spurring thoughts profound
    with moans of animal sound
    spins us round and round

    spins us round and round
    a vortex in which we play
    colors far from gray

    colors far from gray
    colors without a measure
    shades of my pleasure

    shades of my pleasure
    golden tones of my treasure
    taken at leisure
    [/CENTER]
  • artformartform
    Posts: 1,488
    [QUOTE=rumel;88387][CENTER]

    shades of my pleasure
    golden tones of my treasure
    taken at leisure
    [/CENTER]


    Rumel, you are amazing in so many ways! You are creating a great new East/West hybrid/integrative poetic form here!!! If I may suggest, you creating the Byronic Haiku.

    The pulsing insistent rhyme schemes, shifting in their own numerical counts like music, push your meaning and its felt energetic power in rolling roiling narrative, lushly of the golden Romantic era and yet on the spare modernist minimal frame of the traditional meditative haiku. Amazing!!! The Rumelian Byronic Haiku!!! Another Anerosian triumph!

    All poetic forms and new inventions welcomed here in the Haiku Chain, as long as they are 5-7-5, and the previous last line is repeated as your first line. Sonnet writers, free verse and all others welcome within the simple HC Rule. Hybridize guys and our gals here too... :D :D :D

    [I]af

    taken at leisure
    slight intent, memory acts,
    timeless ecstasies
  • rumelrumel
    Posts: 2,265
    artform,

    Thanks for the compliment, I challenged myself by seeking to make the Haiku rhyme with at least two lines while still creating a coherent thought/image, this has made it more fun for me.
    [CENTER]five, seven and five
    simple syllables survive
    Haiku comes alive

    [QUOTE=artform;88397]taken at leisure
    slight intent, memory acts,
    timeless ecstasies
    timeless ecstasies
    move through a tiny worm hole
    to face my true soul

    to face my true soul
    may shatter my illusions
    freed from confusions

    freed from confusions
    and loosed from delusions
    enlightenment

    [/CENTER]
  • artformartform
    Posts: 1,488
    [QUOTE=rumel;88440]

    freed from confusions
    and loosed from delusions
    enlightenment
    [/CENTER]

    enlightenment
    lucid beyond delusions
    fresh, breathing light, peace

    fresh, breathing light, peace
    the way to Aneros all
    all life, you are there

    all life, you are there
    prostate freedom's golden prize
    timeless serene bliss

    timeless serene bliss
    always there, even as you
    shake rattle and roll

    shake rattle and roll
    first prostate awakening
    opens energies

    opens energies
    all your possibilities
    everything and none

    everything and none
    universal consciousness
    enlightenment
  • artformartform
    Posts: 1,488
    artform said:


    everything and none
    universal consciousness
    enlightenment



    enlightenment
    evolves many forms, then one
    withal, with all All
  • artformartform
    Posts: 1,488
    [QUOTE=artform;88530]enlightenment
    evolves many forms, then one
    withal, with all All

    withal, with all All
    y'all come the wedding of
    Sophia and thee
  • artformartform
    Posts: 1,488
    [QUOTE=artform;88567]withal, with all All
    y'all come the wedding of
    Sophia and thee

    Sophia and thee
    wisdom come to you through your
    Aneros journey
  • artformartform
    Posts: 1,488
    [QUOTE=artform;88684]Sophia and thee
    wisdom come to you through your
    Aneros journey

    Aneros journey
    where are you along the way?
    whole health ecstatic

    or

    Aneros journey
    where are you along the way?
    male female bardo

    or

    Aneros journey
    where are you along the way?
    butt buzz and chairgasms

    Write about your current plateau pleasures in 5-7-5 framework. This challenge promotes your flexible rewiring! Bonus!!
  • rumelrumel
    Posts: 2,265
    [CENTER][QUOTE=artform;90545]Aneros journey
    where are you along the way?
    butt buzz and chairgasms

    Butt buzz and chairgasms
    sarcasms dissolve in phantasms
    orgasms sate soul chasms

    orgasms sate soul chasms
    filling our heaven and earth
    with healing and mirth

    with healing and mirth
    enrich our lives with new worth
    feeling a rebirth

    feeling a rebirth
    unique and universal
    sublime reversal

    sublime reversal
    from tradition with its curbs
    the pebble disturbs
    [/CENTER]
  • GeogioGeogio
    Posts: 107
    The pebble disturbs
    My rippled pond responding
    Doppler internal
  • rumelrumel
    Posts: 2,265
    [CENTER][QUOTE=Geogio;90636]The pebble disturbs
    My rippled pond responding
    Doppler internal

    Doppler internal
    compression and expansion
    pleasure waves astound

    pleasure waves astound
    emotions become unbound
    riding on a sound

    riding on a sound
    on our journey round and round
    O-zones will be found[/CENTER]
  • O-zones will be found
    One must only be relaxed
    Drive in and explode
  • artformartform
    Posts: 1,488
    Great bridge building, ever expanding with thanks from all rumel!! :D :D

    Welcome newest Haikuists and thanks for your great initial insertions in the chain: Georgio and brianadams!! :D :D

    Poet early and poet often! Prompts more wide-spread and fantastic rewiring!!!

    all the best creative orgasmic aesthetic meaningful fun in your life and your partners all

    artform

    [QUOTE=brianadams;90648]O-zones will be found
    One must only be relaxed
    Drive in and explode

    drive in and explode
    so goes my ICE goddess now
    just slam dandy man